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Sometimes I still see you as rain-scented innocence
With a morbid fascination for dead butterflies.

Now you like to dye your hair the colour of their wings,
All the shades of teenage rebellion.
You seduce leather studded danger with
Smudged kohl and a touch of cold indifference.

When they leave you with bruises and broken mirrors,
You blame the heavens and the misaligned stars.

I never understood
Why you scream anger from the rooftops,
Or why you keep gossamer swallowtails in a glass jar.

Do you still squeeze their stained glass wings
Between times new roman pages
Like you did when you weren’t afraid to be happy?
:iconfrostyshadows:
It came to me last night. Guess my poetry phase is still going on :D
At first I wrote it in third person, but I read one of my friend's poems -she's a better poet than I am, I think- and it was second person. So I changed mine to first and second person. It sounds a lot more personal that way.

Some people refrain themselves from being happy and they don't even realize it.
:icongavind21:
~gavind21 Feb 16, 2013  Student Artist
It's a good piece, very detailed imagery.
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